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Post by glenmar on Jul 9, 2007 10:06:51 GMT -5
Name: Blackbird. Breed: Arabian. Gender: Colt (male). Age: 2 History: He came from Arabia. He and his family where being shipped over seas, when a large storm brewed. The ship crashed and they where all swept away in the sea. He has yet to find his family, when he washed up on the shores of this land he was alone. Personality: He is a brave soul, quite though. He will stand tall when needed and never backs down from a fight. He just avoids them... Height: 15 hands Sire: black beauty Dam: blue bird Picture:
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Post by Lauren on Jul 9, 2007 10:53:55 GMT -5
First of all, please edit this so it has proper punctuation(capital letters)
His gender if he is only 2 would be a colt.
Go more in depth of how he came from Arabia so it doesn't sound like he magically warped here.
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Post by glenmar on Jul 9, 2007 11:11:38 GMT -5
hows that?
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Post by Lauren on Jul 9, 2007 11:18:04 GMT -5
Much better. Approved and welcome.
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